30 July, 2011

Rain






Darkened, bulging sky,
Rain exploding on the earth,
resonating my thundering heart.

(This is my first attempt at writing a Haiku. Inspiration from here.)

6 comments:

  1. In haiku, there are no metaphors...in fact no figures of speech.

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  2. Thanks for pointing that out. But then, I can hardly write without the use of metaphors or figures of speech.. So, then Haiku is not my cup of tea.. :)

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  3. very beautiful Haiku..I can see the imagery move and make impacts.

    smiles.

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  4. Greetings,

    How are you?

    Jingle Poetry has moved, we are doing poetry picnic now, our week 1 theme is

    “Adam and Eve” ,


    Please feel free to join us, all are very welcome!
    Blessings fly your way!
    xoxox

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