In haiku, there are no metaphors...in fact no figures of speech.
Thanks for pointing that out. But then, I can hardly write without the use of metaphors or figures of speech.. So, then Haiku is not my cup of tea.. :)
very beautiful Haiku..I can see the imagery move and make impacts.smiles.
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