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Rain






Darkened, bulging sky,
Rain exploding on the earth,
resonating my thundering heart.

(This is my first attempt at writing a Haiku. Inspiration from here.)
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  1. achu1 August 2011 at 12:47

    nice

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  2. Unknown1 August 2011 at 17:22

    In haiku, there are no metaphors...in fact no figures of speech.

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  3. Kirtimalini1 August 2011 at 20:52

    Thanks for pointing that out. But then, I can hardly write without the use of metaphors or figures of speech.. So, then Haiku is not my cup of tea.. :)

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  4. Anonymous2 August 2011 at 08:11

    stunning one.

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  5. Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden23 August 2011 at 19:59

    very beautiful Haiku..I can see the imagery move and make impacts.

    smiles.

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  6. Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden23 August 2011 at 19:59

    Greetings,

    How are you?

    Jingle Poetry has moved, we are doing poetry picnic now, our week 1 theme is

    “Adam and Eve” ,


    Please feel free to join us, all are very welcome!
    Blessings fly your way!
    xoxox

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