tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post6743693598094922831..comments2023-04-29T18:22:04.143+05:30Comments on Anaahat: Dont fill in the silenceKirtimalinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07294107792113232861noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post-24454114182552979672010-10-19T16:28:05.343+05:302010-10-19T16:28:05.343+05:30Hahahaha...
Thankyou both for analysing it :) Real...Hahahaha...<br />Thankyou both for analysing it :) Really appreciate that.<br />I think both your points say that the second para doesnt fit in the entire thing. I think I will take the second para and write another post. :)Kirtimalinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07294107792113232861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post-82981619414910177862010-10-19T16:25:18.194+05:302010-10-19T16:25:18.194+05:30Dear Kirti,
Infact I just loved the second para mo...Dear Kirti,<br />Infact I just loved the second para most and like I told you I think it should have been the concluding para.<br />Words don't do as much value<br />as we were taught,<br />rarely they give the<br />wisdom we seek....waah..!!waah...!!:):)These line sreach the sky...!!<br />Keep penning..:)..!!Arti Jalanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13322856217060405490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post-44283910881913493552010-10-19T15:59:56.071+05:302010-10-19T15:59:56.071+05:30Nice one. I like the idea and the flow. I am howev...Nice one. I like the idea and the flow. I am however, not too happy with second para though. It acts like a diversion here for some reason. <br />Also, reminded me of the 'comfortable silence' scene from the film 'Pulp Fiction' :)Deveshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00677562591367757388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post-81790612619623209842010-10-19T15:32:41.312+05:302010-10-19T15:32:41.312+05:30Hahahaha... No maan. I wouldnt want silence with M...Hahahaha... No maan. I wouldnt want silence with Mantagi! :)Kirtimalinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07294107792113232861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1205872410423686391.post-76387083346333900212010-10-19T15:13:48.964+05:302010-10-19T15:13:48.964+05:30Is this in any way influenced by the time you spen...Is this in any way influenced by the time you spent with the baby yesterday :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com